Blog 13

May 2, 2010 smithdaniellebqcq

When it came to combining the papers, i had to realize that i had to make it suitable for my audience. I noticed that I had things in my paper that my audience should already know, which would defeat the purpose of it being in my paper. It wasnt hard changing my paper around because I knew that it needed changed around anyway. One of the most interesting things that I had to do was try to find out who my specific audience was. I knew I wanted to publish my article in an journal that is appropriate for my paper and also to inform people that aroma can increase sexual feelings.

What needs editing is adding more information that i feel is critical for my paper. I dont feel that my paper is anywhere near perfect and could use more work. So i feel that the whole paper could use some tweaking to it. But the most crucial part that needs help is my introduction and conclusion. These are the parts that stick out the most in the readers head.The readers need to be hooked into your paper and leave your paper feeling like they know something without that your paper is a failure. So these parts are the main parts that I feel need tweaking. Once I get to the level i need to feel confident in my paper I will feel more confident.